A friends art January 20th, 2017, 7:26 pm
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My friend drew this and asked if I would post it since she doesn't use art and comic sites like smackjeeves or DeviantArt. It would be really nice to give some constructive criticism or feed back cause she wants to improve her drawings. Thank you for your time.

Posted @ January 20th, 2017, 7:30 pm

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Reader Comments:

And constructive criticism, eh?

I think that maybe the heads should be smaller. Unless she wants to have chibi art style. Because in that case, big heads are perfectly fine. :3

Posted @ January 20th, 2017, 8:42 pm

They need to learn how to draw hands, and the heads are so big they look like they might fall off, and maybe work on eye placement cause they are all staring at something on the left. But I think it looks good!

Posted @ January 20th, 2017, 9:36 pm